Friday, May 22, 2009

the sun only shines to remind a person of their insignificance

today on the train i watched the faces of people

took notice of how few were reading

what they were reading

the epiphany "i have never randomly seen a person reading a poetry book in public" occurred

the train shook a lot

i watched the passing graffiti through the window

the loneliness broke when i saw the word

CUNT

spray painted on a freeway overpass

and finally felt a small connection

but not with any of the people

around me

12 comments:

somethingsomethingelse said...

favorite graffiti seen in the past 24 hours: "i should have fucked you when i had the chance"

jereme said...

true words

An Unreliable Witness said...

I see the graffiti HELP ME SOMEONE every day, scrawled on a wall near a tube station in Earl's Court. I am generally on the way to work when I glimpse it. I feel some sense of kinship.

xTx said...

relating

paula said...

Nice.
Happy Birthday, you.

Mariana Soffer said...

Excelent! I felt myself being on a london subway.
and it's ture that people do not read poetry in public. Is it a shamefull thing to do?

Ani Smith said...

i wish you loved me half as much as i love you

honestly

Matt DeBenedictis said...

This post relaxes me. I never feel connected with people I see. I imagine what it would take for the people to lose the walls that stop them from freaking out, grabbing others, and fighting at random for mere comfort of space. Then I feel oddly connected but still out of place.

BLAKE BUTLER said...

happy bday mane

jereme said...

AUW,

i wrote "I DON'T WANT TO DIE" in a math book once. sometimes i think about it and wonder if some 16 year old girl has my mathbook today and is reading my random message.

xtx,

HI SEX TEA SEX

paula,

you are a sweet kid. thank you.

mariana,

i don't think many people read poetry at all any more. poetry is practiced by an esoteric few which is sad. kind of like latin i guess.

ani,

i wish i could express love half as much as you love me. you are valuable.

matt,

lose all you know.

blake,

thank you kind sir.

sam pink said...

good post.

Robb Todd said...

Loved it

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